Talk:Jikken/@comment-34018739-20190528131327

I understand that you're new here, but look man, this page is both unfinished and improperly formatted. Please read over our Help Pages to better understand our standards and complete this page as soon as possible. If needed, you can add our WIP template.

On a note related to the actual content of this page, I've noticed that it seems somewhat tonally confused. Anyone who sees the image of your creature would assume it isn't meant to be taken seriously. No offense, but it looks comically ridiculous. However, the actual content of the page doesn't make it clear that this thing is a joke, giving the impression that it's meant to be taken seriously, which with the image, is going to be hard for most people do. My advice would be to settle on what you want to do with this page and make adjustments from there.