Talk:Council of Creators Episode 34/@comment-30486429-20180105175434

YAY, IT'S FINALLY FINISHED!

For Indominus, this must be an orgasm in literary form. Literally everything he likes is here and he finally has an episode where he is the main character and the main focus. It's also nice to see Wolfzilla get a little more focus. There were some pretty funny moments too. I like the idea of Cdr measuring things by 'Ultraman 80s time' (the best measurement of time, of course) and the way Silver the Hedgehog just says "hey guys" as if they were in a normal situation was pretty amusing.

These two lines of dialogue, however, actually made me physically laugh out loud:

"I think I'll call him....Nightmare Raptor" he pondered to himself. "Creative" said BRK as he looked around his odd surroundings.

Overall, it was a good episode. However there were some grammatical errors and some sentences came across as pretty malformed, as Koopa puts it. For example:

"After he said that, the sky turned to a read and a large tornado-like swirl formed in it."

What's a read? Bit of a weird mistake. Other than the few mistakes, I still enjoyed it.