Talk:Archon (Film)/@comment-30161070-20170811172612

Just read this, and it's good. The plot sounds more like a synopsis than an actual story but it suffices well enough, although I do wonder why anyone would care 1,000 tons of Nuclear weapons in any one place, but hey, I'm not in Government. Good story, but not great. Maybe if you elaborated more on Archon's hours of destruction, something like in G54 where you see the damage, and also the shock and terror caused by the monster's rampage, this would probably even better. Good work.