Talk:Kurokogon 2: Electric Boogaloo/@comment-26950258-20181103022641

i proclaim copyright on behalf on sharkosuchus x koseiru 2: electric boogaloo

anyways, this was pretty good and i enjoy kurokogon's edginess and wittiness. however, there's one thing that bugs me: it's an enormous block of text.

blocks of texts are visually unappealing and can be hard to read. there's two ways to fix this:

1. every time a new character speaks, you're supposed to make a new paragraph. seeing that at the beginning and end two kaiju are communicating, you can easily do this one.

2. every five or so sentences, you can also break up paragraphs.

hope this helps!